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I thought the whole first-person perspective was well-done.

You do a macro story just as good as a micro starru!

Nice work!

I never read or liked the comics. Ther're too hard to get into.

Link wrote:Aww.. Cream hugging Blaze.. saw cute !

And Blaze is very very wise I think ! (Supporting her decision but leaving the decision to her whether the decision was right or wrong!)

Like an old sage!

Ooooo! A fight scene. I haven't seen a good fight in ages.

Well, one that I haven't been involved in.

Wait a second. I go for a few days and Star's come up with a first person growth story! In one! Did I miss something? Anyway, I'd better review. I like the build up and the aftermath of Cream's little growth spurt, and I am once again speechless. And on a note on your quality of writing: better then...

no one will be the judge of your hands star.

Aaah, I see

LOL. Imagine the mess Sonic would have made if had got smashed by Amy's hammer. eeewwwww.....

Not sure I get what you mean.

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Whoa! chillout Star! I was just eeerrrrmmm....... admiring the british countryside that I live next to. Seriously. I like how you've let Sonic to defend himself.

Hmmm....interesting

Well, when I find it hard to be motivated, reading other peoples stories tends to help. I tend to get into what I call my 'writing hat' after I've read someone elses stories. Your stories have had me writing a few stories, for example.

That's an interesting idea. you'd have to experiment with it a bit, but I think that could be a good story. Who'd you have in mind?

Get well soon Star

And the sparks begin to fly! Awesome chapter as always. Ive got to start thinking of new compliments.