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dude thanks!

Hey guys hows it goin? I know i havent been on in awhile but im back and ready to write! :D Inside Amy's House... "Amy please you don't understand you've gone crazy with power but its not too late i can save you!" says the shaking with fear sonic. "oh no no no sonic this time there wi...

Hey welcome back bud! When i read your story "Reaching New Heights" I thought it was amazing. Now that your back you can get started on new bigger and better stories! I can't wait to see what you have planned.

I would but i like your part better because it gives me an example so i will use what you gave me to make a part 4.

Yeah i kinda get it. But I'm still not clear on the whole comma thing, also i can't write as good as you so how you turned one paragraph into three! I couldn't do that. One thing i do get is the "show not tell" rule but sometimes its hard for me to "show".

oh ok i will edit the story a bit thanks and about the comma thing they only go after conjunctions like but, and, then... any way thanks

I personally think sizable relationships. But whatever one you pick when do you think they will be posted? This goes for the vggts site too.

READ Darkshadow's part three...

Part 2: Getting better When Amy and Sonic got home Amy put Sonic on the couch then went for some medicine. "Here Sonic open wide." Amy says with a smile. *scribble scribble* "No way! That stuff is gross!" Sonic scribbles on his board. "Sonic dont test me..." Amy says w...

Plot: Amy rose is tired of being rejected by sonic even when sonic is sick and amy helps him get better he still ignores her. But all that changes when amy finds a mysterious jem. O_o Part 1: Sickness "Sonic don't eat that ice cream you will catch a cold!" Amy yells at sonic who is eating ...

Dude this is great it kinda took a long time though what happened to you?

Yeah i know what one ur talking about that is what i was going for. Did i describe it well

In Tails Lab... "Ok now to test the growth and...*BZZT*...Yeah it worked!" The fox yells as he shoots an apple and it grows twice its size. "Now to help Sonic." Tails says leaving for Amy's house. Meanwhile... Amy has left the room leaving sonic all alone on her bed. "Whew ...

"Oh Sonic we will have so much fun together!" Amy says cheerfully closing her front door behind her while holding the tiny Sonic. "Amy you don't understand please put me down!" Sonic has been trying to convince Amy to let him go but it doesn't work. Meanwhile at Sonic's house... ...

Hey DJ when ya gonna post the next part because this is a really good story so far.